I really liked your film. You could improve on was the speed of your clips. They were really fast and I only had time to look at the words not the picture.
Good work Dani! I really liked your poem, and it was very inspirational. One thing you could improve on is make the slides slower. I couldn't really keep up with your text so I had to rewind it. Your pictures really fits your poem. Well done!
The slides moved really fast I didn't have enough time to read every slide. When the image is a light colour the words were rally hard to see aswell.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your film. You could improve on was the speed of your clips. They were really fast and I only had time to look at the words not the picture.
ReplyDeleteGood work Dani! I really liked your poem, and it was very inspirational. One thing you could improve on is make the slides slower. I couldn't really keep up with your text so I had to rewind it. Your pictures really fits your poem. Well done!
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